In honor of St. Valentine’s day, I thought I
would post an excerpt from The Highlander’s Accidental Bride. I wanted a sweet
setting with love between the hero and heroine – unfortunately, as my critique
partners will attest, it never is quite that easy.
So, the following is the scene where Laird
Eaden Scott and Mary, now Lady Scott, are discussing the reasons he should
grant her a divorce for the ‘accidental’ marriage. Mary is unexpectedly drawn
to him, and Eaden cannot explain why he cannot let her go.
“So, what do ye propose I do with ye now?”
Eaden asked, his voice deceptively soft. With a start, Mary realized he stared
broodingly at her. Which was better than snarling at her in anger, but it gave
her little insight into his thinking.
“Allow me to return to Bellecourt.” Thankfully,
her voice held only a faint tremble.
Eaden snorted his opinion on her suggested
course of action, and Mary bristled. “I am of no further use to you.” Growing
anger gave her strength. “You brought me here under false pretenses, and now
you’ve been found out. You should have the grace to at least admit you were
wrong and send me home!”
“Send ye home? Any man would argue ye are
home now, milady.” Bitter mockery colored his voice. “What would yer prospects
be at Bellecourt? Is there some smitten young swain who would take ye now,
another man’s woman?”
“You twice-cursed idiot!” Mary raged, bolting
from her chair. “‘Tis not as if I had willingly taken a lover! I know other men
have divorced their wives! And it’s not as though I carried your child . . .”
“Ye are no’ with child?” Eaden demanded,
speaking over her indignation.
“No,” she replied shortly. “I have not had
time to speak privately with you yet. I knew this morning I . . .” Her voice
trailed off in embarrassment. She looked away from him, but not before she
thought she saw a look of disappointment cross his face. How could that be?
She dared to turn back to him. “Were you
hoping I was?”
Eaden did not answer her, but his glower told
her she hit closer to the truth than he would admit. When did she become adept
at reading his scowls?
“Why? Why would you want a child from me?”
Eaden turned away. “I need a son,” he stated
bluntly.
“Would it be so hard to find someone else who
would make you a good wife?”
“What qualities would make me a good wife?”
Eaden turned and took a step toward her, but Mary swallowed hard and held her
ground. “Tell me, lass. What makes a good wife?”
She grabbed at the first thing
that came to her mind. “You need someone of your social status. And someone who
knows how to run the castle and deal with the servants.” She stared boldly at
him. “And what will the king say?”
“King Robert will be fashed,” Eaden admitted
with a tight shrug. “But we are wed now and so is Miriam.” He frowned. “Ye were
raised with her. Surely ye know about running a household.”
“You know nothing of me.” Quiet dignity
colored her reply. “Nothing at all.”
Eaden advanced on her, slowly. Mary’s
breathing quickened but she dared not flinch or back away. She couldn’t bear to
show her cowardice, not when she stood to gain her release from this marriage
if she remained strong. She would let nothing stop her bid for freedom from a life
she’d never asked for. Nothing.
He touched an errant curl against
her cheek, cupping it in his hand as though weighing the silken heaviness.
Warring with her intent to stand and force the issue, every instinct now told
her to run. But a strange lassitude came over her, holding her in place, and
she swayed slightly into his caress.
“Ye are beautiful,” he breathed into her ear
as he stroked her hair. His other hand cupped her chin and he eased her face
up.
Mary blinked. “I am not beautiful,” she corrected
him with firm assurance.
“Ye need look in the mirror, milady. Ye have
the greenest eyes I’ve ever seen, and yer hair has strands of gold running
through it.”
“I do?” she stammered. “It does?”
Eaden’s lips curved and a slow smile creased
his face. “Aye. And there’s this intriguing little cleft in yer chin.” He ran a
thumb across the spot under discussion. Her head jerked as she tried to see
what he was talking about, but he held her firm. “And yer lips are soft and
full,” he whispered, moving his thumb to rub gently across her mouth.
Heat slid through her body. Her lips parted,
tingled with sensation. She found herself mesmerized by the expression on his
face, so close to hers, the way his eyes darkened and his nostrils flared as
though drinking in her scent. The instinct, which a moment ago urged her to
flee, now kept her rooted to the spot.
To her surprise, she found she wanted to
touch him, wanted him to touch her. The muscles in her arms trembled as she
fought the unfamiliar desire to twine herself around him. The same instinct
urged her to press against him, to open her mouth further, to receive his kiss
. . .
No!
Her mind protested as his lips touched hers and stole the very breath from her.
She did not want to fall under his spell, for she knew full well where his
kisses could lead, and the memory of her wedding night echoed ever fresh in her
mind. Though she’d become used to his presence and his occasional, casual
touch, this was so much more dangerous.
* * *
Happy Valentine's Day!
May we each find our Happily Ever After


9 comments:
If Mary is too ambivalent about Eaden, I'll take him---Of course I'd have to clear it with my husband first... ;)
LOL! Thanks, Deanie! One 'duty-bound' Highland laird and a feisty lady's companion make for some interesting times. Tell your husband not to worry. There is an HEA in the air for Eaden and Mary.
Yeah, but you really make 'em sweat to achieve it. It's such a terrific story I can hardly wait to download it to my Nook! Thanks for this wonderful excerpt, Cathy. So-o, now I'm really impatient.
~Cate
What fun to read your excerpt, Cathy. I love this kind of plot. Sounds like a great read. Best of luck with your sales and a happy Valentine's Day to you!
Thanks, Cate and Paisley! I'm so glad you both stopped by. Cate, I rewrote the ending. Just a bit, tweaked it, really. I think you'll like it. :-)
Lovely, Cathy!
And congratulations. The premise you have here is truly one of my favorites.
Thanks, RedPeril! I loved the initial thought that became the premise for this book. "What if he married the wrong woman?" Lots of themes to work with.
Glad you stopped by!
I remember this scene. This story has come a long way from the first time I saw it. Well done, Cathy. Your writing has really blossomed. Here's to lots of sales!
I'm glad you liked it, Derek. The critique group really pushed my writing to a new level. I am looking forward to everyone's opinion of the finished book. And to some new fans, too :-)
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